What is a personal statement?
Your personal statement is all about… you! It’s your licence to showcase your strengths, achievements and experiences, and how they’ve shaped you into the person you are today. Most importantly, it’s your best opportunity to show universities your passion for your subject, why you’re a great candidate for a particular course and how it would help you to achieve your future goals.
Getting the structure right
You’ll be working to a limit of 4,000 characters or 47 lines of text (whichever comes first). While this might sound like a lot, it's only usually 600 to 1,000 words or two sides of A4, so it’s important to write concisely. The structure of your personal statement depends on when you’re applying to begin your course:
- For courses starting in the 2025/26 academic year, your personal statement will be in the current format – a continuous essay-style statement.
- Despite common misconceptions, the personal statement isn't being "scrapped" from September 2026 onwards. Instead, a new three-question process will be introduced, designed to make it easier for you to highlight your skills, experience and motivations.
Tone and style
Your personal statement is a chance to tell your unique story, so make it authentic, enthusiastic and engaging. Show how passionate you are about your subject by using a positive and confident tone, free of any negative language. Avoid copying clichéd phrases, like “I have always had a passion for…” Instead, explain why you’re passionate by mentioning specific examples.
Keep your audience in mind – university Admissions teams are going to expect a professional piece of writing, so it’s important to avoid any informal language or slang. This will demonstrate that you’re serious about your academic goals. Every word counts, so stay clear and concise by avoiding fillers and unnecessary detail. Reading your work aloud is a good way to test this – if it sounds repetitive or clunky, there are probably bits that you could cut out.
Be specific with your examples, and back them up with evidence, as this is far more impactful than simply listing statements about yourself. Show your qualities in action – if you are a great leader for example, rather than saying ‘I have great leadership skills’, describe a situation where you led a team to success.
A good way to keep your writing engaging is to think about your sentence structure. Avoid a choppy flow by using a variety of long and short sentences, and start them in different ways to keep your work interesting.
Using the PEEL method (point, evidence, explanation and link) is a great way to ensure your paragraphs are well-structured, clear and compelling. Here’s how to break it down:
- Point: start with a clear statement about a skill, experience or interest relating to your course.
- Evidence: back it up with a real evidence and examples, whether academic experiences, extracurricular activities or work placements – anything that has helped you to grow and develop is perfect for this section.
- Explain: describe what you learned from this experience and how it developed relevant skills or your understanding of your subject.
- Link: connect it back to your main argument to demonstrate why this makes you a great fit for your course.
Bad example (repetitive and generic with a choppy flow)
“I have always been a hardworking student. I am also good at communicating. I became interested in Business at School. We had to create a mock business plan which involved lots of research. This made we want to study Business because I’m eager to develop skills in leadership and problem solving at university to help me reach my dream career."
Good example (varied, engaging and uses PEEL structure)
"My passion for Business began at school when I was tasked with creating a mock business plan (point) which involved researching market trends, customer needs and financial strategy (evidence). This experience sparked my fascination into how successful companies analyse challenges and adapt to change to stay competitive, while it helped me to discover problem-solving skills and a strategic mindset, which I am eager to refine further (explain). Through this project, I realised that a career in this field is the ideal path for me, and I am excited to gain crucial practical knowledge at university (link)."
Finding inspiration
Showing a deeper understanding and genuine interest in your subject area is a great way to make your personal statement stand out. Taking time to engage with wider reading outside of the classroom – whether books, articles, podcasts, videos or anything other educational materials – helps to show universities that you are informed about your chosen subject and are therefore likely to succeed at university.
The University of Derby has lots of great resources that you could use as a starting point. Our Inaugural Lecture series showcases our academics delving deeply into their subject areas and the topics of their research, offering fascinating insights into the latest developments within their fields. With lecturers covering various topics spanning all our colleges, there’s something for everyone.
Many of our academics are carrying out world-leading research and are making a real difference in their fields, and just like you, their journey started with discovering a passion for their subject. Visit our research page to explore their groundbreaking research and watch our video for insights into their stories.
Using AI
Using a tool like Chat GPT to generate large chunks of your personal statement might seem tempting, but did you know that this could be considered cheating by universities and colleges, affecting your chances of receiving an offer?
Ask yourself this… does AI know you, the challenges you’ve faced and the effort you’ve put in to get to this point? It might be able to generate polished-sounding text, but it can’t replicate your personality – and this is what will make you stand out to Admissions teams. Don’t sell yourself short with a robotic personal statement that lacks true substance and authenticity!
While you shouldn’t use AI to write your personal statement for you, there are some scenarios where it can be helpful including:
- Grammar and spelling checking
- Structure suggestions
- Generating ideas
Before you submit
You've worked so hard and you're ready to submit your personal statement, but pause... and print it out. Sharing it with your teacher and a family member first to proofread will give you valuable feedback, and help you to catch any typos. It’s also a good opportunity to see whether they find it clear and compelling. Once they’ve offered their feedback and you’ve made any necessary changes, read through it one more time. If you’re happy, confidently submit in the knowledge that you’ve done all you can to perfect it!
Frequently asked questions
Before you dive into your personal statement, find answers to some of our most frequently asked questions:
When should I start writing it?
It’s never too early to think about your personal statement, and it’s a good idea to start as soon as possible – ideally several months before the UCAS deadline. Most schools and colleges will set an internal deadline, earlier than the official submission date, aimed at giving you plenty of time to gather feedback and make necessary changes.
Can I use quotes?
When used effectively, quotes can help to convey your point – but remember that university Admissions teams want to hear your voice, not someone else’s. Use them sparingly, make sure they’re directly relevant and explain why the message matters to you.
Do I need to talk about my qualifications?
No, universities will already see your qualifications as part of your application, so there’s no need to waste word count by listing them again. Instead focus on how your studies have shaped your skills and passions relating to the course.
What if I’m applying for two completely different courses?
Writing a personal statement that works for two contrasting courses is challenging, but not impossible! Look for common ground between each, and focus on the transferrable skills and experiences that apply to both. This could be qualities like problem solving, research skills, adaptability, creativity, effective communication or anything else that’s relevant.
What happens if I miss the UCAS deadline?
In this scenario, your application will be marked as late, and while this doesn’t mean that you won’t be considered, it could impact your chances of getting a place on competitive courses where places are limited. Getting started well before the UCAS deadline is the best way to produce a personal statement to be proud of and avoid any unnecessary stress, while giving yourself the best chance of securing a place on your preferred course.
If you've missed the UCAS deadline, don't panic, you're not out of options! You can still apply through UCAS Extra or Clearing – which both offer great opportunities to find your perfect path.
Is the introduction really that important?
Yes! Admissions teams read hundreds of statements, so a strong opening section can help yours to stand out. If you’re unsure on how to start, focus on writing the main body of your statement first. Once your key points are clear, it will be easier to write an introduction that ties everything together.
How can I make mine stand out?
The best way to stand out is to tell your own story. Avoid getting sucked into the trap of using clichéd quotes or vague statements, and instead share experiences, interests and skills that reflect who you are, why you’re passionate about the subject area and what you’ve learned from your experiences. Give Admission teams a glimpse of your journey to this point and get them interested in where you plan to go next!
We're here to help
If you'd like further advice or support in writing an awesome personal statement, please contact us on study@derby.ac.uk or come along to one of our Open Days, where you can chat face-to-face with our Admissions team who will offer tailored advice on making your personal statement stand out.
Good luck, you’ve got this!