Writing your personal statement

What is a personal statement?

Your personal statement is all about… you! It’s your licence to showcase your strengths, achievements and experiences, and how they’ve shaped you into the person you are today. Most importantly, it’s your best opportunity to show universities your passion for your subject, why you’re a great candidate for a particular course and how it would help you to achieve your future goals.

Getting the structure right

You’ll be working to a limit of 4,000 characters or 47 lines of text (whichever comes first). While this might sound like a lot, it's only usually 600 to 1,000 words or two sides of A4, so it’s important to write concisely. The structure of your personal statement depends on when you’re applying to begin your course:

  • Grab the reader’s attention straight away with an engaging introduction that clearly explains how you’ve chosen your subject, while highlighting your interests and future ambitions. To make it even more impactful, reference an experience or moment that sparked your interest in the course. Aim to keep this concise, using around 10% of your character count.
  • Mention your academic achievements and how the knowledge and skills you’ve gained have prepared you for success in your chosen subject. It’s also worthwhile to write about any further reading you’ve engaged in, as this this shows your enthusiasm for the subject beyond what you've learned in the classroom. 
  • Discuss any work experience, employment or volunteering you’ve undertaken and how this experience will help you at university. It's important to include transferrable skills you’ve gained including teamwork, time management, leadership communication, organisation or problem solving. Link these back to your chosen course and your future aspirations where possible. 
  • It’s also worthwhile to reference the extra-curricular activities you’ve participated in, any skills or awards you’ve gained, and how the experienced built will benefit your university journey. These could be academic achievements, leadership roles, voluntary work, participation in subject related clubs, creative accomplishments like passing music exams or sporting success.
  • Finish with a strong closing statement, taking up roughly 10% of your character count, emphasising and reiterating key points that you’ve mentioned throughout your personal statement. You could also talk about your goals for the future and how your course will help you to reach them. 

Get started by trying UCAS’ personal statement builder, which will help you to think about what to include and how to structure your work. 

When writing your personal statement for 2026 entry, it's important to bear in mind that each question requires a minimum of 350 characters. There's no set guide on how to split your available characters across each, though we recommend making sure that answers are balanced and thoughtful to give yourself the best chance of showing why you’d be a great fit. Don’t worry about where to include examples if they’re relevant to multiple questions – universities will read your application as a whole, so the key is to make sure that all important points are covered without repeating yourself. 

Question 1: Why do you want to study this course or subject?

  • Think about what started your interest in this subject, whether a key moment in your life, a role model or simply a passion that you want to explore further. This is your opportunity to showcase your unique journey and everything that’s led you to this point.
  • Show your enthusiasm towards the course by mentioning how you’ve explored it beyond the classroom. Whether you’ve delved further into the subject by reading a thought-provoking book, or you’ve been inspired by a leading expert in the field, this is a chance to express your curiosity.
  • Look to the future and consider how this course aligns with your aspirations and goals. If you have a specific career path in mind, explain how it will support that ambition, but don’t worry if you’re still exploring your options as you can reflect more broadly on how the skills and knowledge you’ve gained will help you.

Question 2: How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

  • Highlight how your studies link to your chosen course, whether it’s a subject you’re currently studying at school or college or anything similar that’s relevant. If you’re no longer in full-time education, focus on your most recent learning experiences.
  • Think about the key skills that make you a strong candidate, and how the subjects or modules you’ve studied have helped you to gain valuable transferrable skills, like problem solving, critical thinking or communication. Be specific when explaining why these skills will be directly useful for your next step. 
  • Bear in mind that universities will already see your qualifications as part of your wider application, so instead, save word count by focussing on other academic accomplishments. This could be winning an award, leading a team, or excelling in a key project or presentation. 

Question 3: What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

  • Universities want to see what you’ve learned from real-world experiences, whether work experience or volunteering. Don’t worry too much about whether the experience is directly linked to your chosen course – it’s more about the skills you've developed and how they’d be transferrable. Reflect on how these have shaped your abilities, perspectives and motivations.
  • Have personal challenges inspired your goals or outlook? Perhaps you’ve taken on significant responsibilities such as caring for a family member, managing a long-term health condition or balancing work commitments with your studies. Draw from these experiences, and talk about how they've helped you to build resilience, empathy, problem solving or determination.
  • Set yourself apart by writing about the hobbies and extracurricular activities that define you, as these examples give universities a sense of what motivates you.
  • It’s great to highlight any achievements that you’ve gained outside of school or college. Whether you’ve had the opportunity to take on a leadership role such as being captain of a sports team, earned a music qualification, won a writing competition or accomplished something else that you’re particularly proud of, it’s important to mention this.
  • If you’ve left full-time education, talk about how you’ve been spending your time, whether that’s in employment, taking online courses, volunteering or any other personal development activities, and how these have prepared you for university.

Tone and style

Your personal statement is a chance to tell your unique story, so make it authentic, enthusiastic and engaging. Show how passionate you are about your subject by using a positive and confident tone, free of any negative language. Avoid copying clichéd phrases, like “I have always had a passion for…” Instead, explain why you’re passionate by mentioning specific examples.

Keep your audience in mind – university Admissions teams are going to expect a professional piece of writing, so it’s important to avoid any informal language or slang. This will demonstrate that you’re serious about your academic goals. Every word counts, so stay clear and concise by avoiding fillers and unnecessary detail. Reading your work aloud is a good way to test this – if it sounds repetitive or clunky, there are probably bits that you could cut out. 

Be specific with your examples, and back them up with evidence, as this is far more impactful than simply listing statements about yourself. Show your qualities in action – if you are a great leader for example, rather than saying ‘I have great leadership skills’, describe a situation where you led a team to success.

A good way to keep your writing engaging is to think about your sentence structure. Avoid a choppy flow by using a variety of long and short sentences, and start them in different ways to keep your work interesting. 

Using the PEEL method (point, evidence, explanation and link) is a great way to ensure your paragraphs are well-structured, clear and compelling. Here’s how to break it down:

Bad example (repetitive and generic with a choppy flow)

“I have always been a hardworking student. I am also good at communicating. I became interested in Business at School. We had to create a mock business plan which involved lots of research. This made we want to study Business because I’m eager to develop skills in leadership and problem solving at university to help me reach my dream career."

Good example (varied, engaging and uses PEEL structure)

"My passion for Business began at school when I was tasked with creating a mock business plan (point) which involved researching market trends, customer needs and financial strategy (evidence). This experience sparked my fascination into how successful companies analyse challenges and adapt to change to stay competitive, while it helped me to discover problem-solving skills and a strategic mindset, which I am eager to refine further (explain). Through this project, I realised that a career in this field is the ideal path for me, and I am excited to gain crucial practical knowledge at university (link)."

Finding inspiration

Showing a deeper understanding and genuine interest in your subject area is a great way to make your personal statement stand out. Taking time to engage with wider reading outside of the classroom – whether books, articles, podcasts, videos or anything other educational materials – helps to show universities that you are informed about your chosen subject and are therefore likely to succeed at university. 

The University of Derby has lots of great resources that you could use as a starting point. Our Inaugural Lecture series showcases our academics delving deeply into their subject areas and the topics of their research, offering fascinating insights into the latest developments within their fields. With lecturers covering various topics spanning all our colleges, there’s something for everyone. 

Many of our academics are carrying out world-leading research and are making a real difference in their fields, and just like you, their journey started with discovering a passion for their subject. Visit our research page to explore their groundbreaking research and watch our video for insights into their stories.

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Using AI

Using a tool like Chat GPT to generate large chunks of your personal statement might seem tempting, but did you know that this could be considered cheating by universities and colleges, affecting your chances of receiving an offer?

Ask yourself this… does AI know you, the challenges you’ve faced and the effort you’ve put in to get to this point? It might be able to generate polished-sounding text, but it can’t replicate your personality – and this is what will make you stand out to Admissions teams. Don’t sell yourself short with a robotic personal statement that lacks true substance and authenticity! 

While you shouldn’t use AI to write your personal statement for you, there are some scenarios where it can be helpful including: 

Before you submit

You've worked so hard and you're ready to submit your personal statement, but pause... and print it out. Sharing it with your teacher and a family member first to proofread will give you valuable feedback, and help you to catch any typos. It’s also a good opportunity to see whether they find it clear and compelling. Once they’ve offered their feedback and you’ve made any necessary changes, read through it one more time. If you’re happy, confidently submit in the knowledge that you’ve done all you can to perfect it!

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Frequently asked questions

Before you dive into your personal statement, find answers to some of our most frequently asked questions:

It’s never too early to think about your personal statement, and it’s a good idea to start as soon as possible – ideally several months before the UCAS deadline. Most schools and colleges will set an internal deadline, earlier than the official submission date, aimed at giving you plenty of time to gather feedback and make necessary changes.

When used effectively, quotes can help to convey your point – but remember that university Admissions teams want to hear your voice, not someone else’s. Use them sparingly, make sure they’re directly relevant and explain why the message matters to you. 

4,000 characters or 47 lines, whichever comes first.

No, universities will already see your qualifications as part of your application, so there’s no need to waste word count by listing them again. Instead focus on how your studies have shaped your skills and passions relating to the course.

Writing a personal statement that works for two contrasting courses is challenging, but not impossible! Look for common ground between each, and focus on the transferrable skills and experiences that apply to both. This could be qualities like problem solving, research skills, adaptability, creativity, effective communication or anything else that’s relevant. 

In this scenario, your application will be marked as late, and while this doesn’t mean that you won’t be considered, it could impact your chances of getting a place on competitive courses where places are limited. Getting started well before the UCAS deadline is the best way to produce a personal statement to be proud of and avoid any unnecessary stress, while giving yourself the best chance of securing a place on your preferred course.

If you've missed the UCAS deadline, don't panic, you're not out of options! You can still apply through UCAS Extra or Clearing – which both offer great opportunities to find your perfect path.

Yes! Admissions teams read hundreds of statements, so a strong opening section can help yours to stand out. If you’re unsure on how to start, focus on writing the main body of your statement first. Once your key points are clear, it will be easier to write an introduction that ties everything together. 

The best way to stand out is to tell your own story. Avoid getting sucked into the trap of using clichéd quotes or vague statements, and instead share experiences, interests and skills that reflect who you are, why you’re passionate about the subject area and what you’ve learned from your experiences. Give Admission teams a glimpse of your journey to this point and get them interested in where you plan to go next!

We're here to help

If you'd like further advice or support in writing an awesome personal statement, please contact us on study@derby.ac.uk or come along to one of our Open Days, where you can chat face-to-face with our Admissions team who will offer tailored advice on making your personal statement stand out.

Good luck, you’ve got this!

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